Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Franklin B. Gowen
This article is the result of looking up the significance of Mr. Gowen based on a one-line reference in the John White article (listed in this article's references); the story of how Gowen worked to break up the Molly Maguires captured my attention, and led to the expansion of this article. slambo 22:59, Mar 5, 2005 (UTC)
- Comment - the introduction definitely needs work. →Raul654 23:05, Mar 5, 2005 (UTC)
- The introduction is much, much better now. →Raul654 18:35, Mar 8, 2005 (UTC)
- Agree with Raul. The first sentence should state the most important thing(s) about him, not where he was born. Everyking 00:11, 6 Mar 2005 (UTC)
- I've reworked the lead accordingly. slambo 02:29, Mar 6, 2005 (UTC)
Minor object. This article seems decent, although a bit short, especially given the large number of references used. My only problem is that the lead section needs to briefly explain who or what the Molly Maguires were. Jeronimo 18:27, 6 Mar 2005 (UTC)
- Defined the Maguires in the lead section and noted that the Maguires were Catholics, while the Gowens were Protestants. As I understand it, the Catholic vs. Protestant conflicts are still a factor in modern Ireland. Yeah, there are a lot of references; many of them had only a small number of data points to add, but since they were facts that needed to be verified, the references are all listed. I don't have copies of the two books listed in the Further Reading section, otherwise they would likely be in the References too. slambo 22:54, Mar 6, 2005 (UTC)
- Good fix, support. Jeronimo 07:14, 7 Mar 2005 (UTC)
- Support well referenced compared to some other (much longer) nominations.--ZayZayEM 05:49, 10 Mar 2005 (UTC)
- Support. Very nice. Left some nits on the Talk page. Niteowlneils 04:08, 11 Mar 2005 (UTC)
- Support. Well-done and NPOV on a subject which can be difficult (ie organized labor vs management). Vaoverland 13:35, Mar 11, 2005 (UTC)
- Comment It seems very short (about 11kb - and many of these are references) (which is indicative of either not very much being able to be written about the guy, or of a not quite comprehensive article). I'd be interested to know whether this really all that is interesting that could be said, jguk 22:03, 15 Mar 2005 (UTC)
- Several of the references included a great deal of information about the Molly Maguires (the 1894 article, especially) but only a few details about Gowen's involvement or about the rest of his life. I've got one of the two books in the Further reading section requested through interlibrary loan, and will likely add more once I have a chance to read it. I tried to keep the article limited to Gowen and his connections to the Maguires rather than going into detail about the unions or McParland's investigations. slambo 23:51, Mar 15, 2005 (UTC)
- Support, short but IMHO probably comprehensive enough. JYolkowski 23:01, 15 Mar 2005 (UTC)